Post for Form Monday – The Blues | #Onestoppoetry
Audio version for those who do not mind a slightly off key rendition of the Blues :)
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you know now baby what it is to scream
we found each other on the twitter stream
our words both took us to that special place
but honey darling I can’t touch your face!
Tweet we found each other on the twitter stream
our words both took us to that special place
but honey darling I can’t touch your face!
and now we both got em and now we both got em
dem Cobalt Twitter Blues
I say I love ya I mean it too
but I never met ya that makes blue
you write me poems cut through my heart
I’m screaming baybee because of your art
I really got dem I really got dem
Dem Cobalt Twitter Blues
keep it coming I need it so
the way hurt me so deep and low
words penetrating right to my core
my heart is aching my soul is sore
Cause we both got em, we both got em
dem Cobalt Twitter Blues
Cobalt blue – so blue it puts your eyes out. I like it (although I think of the blues as kind of bruise colored a sort of gray indigo blackish blue) but this works too. So true, about those poems making you fall in love with someone with no face. Hard to have too much of a love affair. Exceptionally good blues form here and fun. Thanks for linking Gay
Gay,
Yes, agree on the indigo blackish blue, I know that color well. The Cobalt Blue is interesting, not mine, well, I’ve adopted it. A special kind of Blue brought on by intense Joy…but then feeling the brightness of the missing at the exact same time.
Many thanks for the comments Gay! Best, Josepf
blues?…. you dint write about getting drunk, jail, no money, no job, lost my girl and mama…… #DavidAllenCoe
lol, I can do that next blues post bro! Then you can play it for me!